corrected some grammatical errors and english idioms in mym level intro texts

git-svn-id: https://s.snth.net/svn/neverball/trunk@3398 78b8d119-cf0a-0410-b17c-f493084dd1d7

diff --git a/data/map-mym/circuit1.map b/data/map-mym/circuit1.map
index 9b64533..d4e2f96 100644 (file)
--- a/data/map-mym/circuit1.map
+++ b/data/map-mym/circuit1.map
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 // entity 0
 {
 "classname" "worldspawn"
-"message" "La course effrénée.\Let's make some laps."
+"message" "La course effrénée.\Let's run some laps."
 "author" "Mehdi Yousfi-Monod"
 "version" "1.1"
 "back" "map-back/city.sol"

diff --git a/data/map-mym/narrow.map b/data/map-mym/narrow.map
index 840cb5c..29073be 100644 (file)
--- a/data/map-mym/narrow.map
+++ b/data/map-mym/narrow.map
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 "time_hs" "3300 4300"
 "goal_hs" "4300 5300"
 "coin_hs" "109 100"
-"message" "Le sentier étroit.\Patience and timing.\Tips: maximise speed at the first slope."
+"message" "Le sentier étroit.\Patience and timing.\Tip: maximise speed at the first slope."
 // brush 0
 {
 ( -64 72 -8 ) ( -192 72 -8 ) ( -192 -56 -8 ) mtrl/turf-grey 0 16 0 0.5 0.5 0 0 0

diff --git a/data/map-mym2/bombman.map b/data/map-mym2/bombman.map
index ed508ff..2cd3eec 100644 (file)
--- a/data/map-mym2/bombman.map
+++ b/data/map-mym2/bombman.map
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 "time_hs" "3000 3500"
 "goal_hs" "4000 4500"
 "coin_hs" "117 80"
-"message" "Les flammes ardentes.\Do this remind you of something?"
+"message" "Les flammes ardentes.\Does this remind you of something?"
 // brush 0
 {
 ( -1024 -32 -8 ) ( -1024 -544 -8 ) ( -512 -544 -8 ) mtrl/turf-grey 64 -255 90 0.5 0.5 0 0 0

diff --git a/data/map-mym2/rainbow.map b/data/map-mym2/rainbow.map
index 99359a7..32372e0 100644 (file)
--- a/data/map-mym2/rainbow.map
+++ b/data/map-mym2/rainbow.map
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 "time_hs" "12000 13000"
 "goal_hs" "13000 14000"
 "coin_hs" "57 50"
-"message" "Rainbow Road.\Make 3 laps to open the goal."
+"message" "Rainbow Road.\Do 3 laps to open the goal."
 "bonus" "1"
 // brush 0
 {

diff --git a/data/map-mym2/sonic.map b/data/map-mym2/sonic.map
index d16c814..783cbbd 100644 (file)
--- a/data/map-mym2/sonic.map
+++ b/data/map-mym2/sonic.map
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 "time_hs" "2600 2800"
 "goal_hs" "3000 3200"
 "coin_hs" "138 100"
-"message" "Un petit échauffement.\Welcome to the new Mehdi's set!"
+"message" "Un petit échauffement.\Welcome to Mehdi's new set!"
 // brush 0
 {
 ( 1216 1332 -64 ) ( 1088 1332 -64 ) ( 1216 1364 -64 ) mtrl/caution 0 0 0 0.5 0.5 0 0 0

diff --git a/data/map-mym2/speed.map b/data/map-mym2/speed.map
index 2b8b92f..4354b17 100644 (file)
--- a/data/map-mym2/speed.map
+++ b/data/map-mym2/speed.map
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 "time_hs" "1750 1800"
 "goal_hs" "1800 1850"
 "coin_hs" "152 140"
-"message" "Plus vite que la vitesse.\Speedness definition."
+"message" "Plus vite que la vitesse.\The definition of speed."
 // brush 0
 {
 ( -64 -240 -8 ) ( -64 -240 64 ) ( -64 -192 64 ) mtrl/chrome 0 0 0 0.5 0.5 0 0 0

diff --git a/data/map-mym2/speeddance.map b/data/map-mym2/speeddance.map
index 3b5d2bd..5eba6c9 100644 (file)
--- a/data/map-mym2/speeddance.map
+++ b/data/map-mym2/speeddance.map
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 // entity 0
 {
 "classname" "worldspawn"
-"message" "La danse asiatique\Trust in the arrows."
+"message" "La danse asiatique\Trust the arrows."
 "author" "Mehdi Yousfi-Monod"
 "version" "1"
 "back" "map-back/city.sol"